Not bad..
Not bad.. needs more dialogue and soem more point to it, but not bad neough to be blammed.
Not bad..
Not bad.. needs more dialogue and soem more point to it, but not bad neough to be blammed.
yeah, it was very arty exprerimental in it's originality. The story is actually a sequenced collection of ideas which included the style of humor i invented. Dialogue isnt part of the invented style.
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